Hi Natarlia My name is Lara and I go to Blaketown school. I really like your storie and my favourite part was when you talked about going to Hamner Springs. I think you could improve by rereading your work to cheek for mistakes. I have never been to eather of those places and I can't wait to go. What was your favourite part of the trip. Keep up the great work.
Hi Natarlia My name is Lara and I go to Blaketown school. I really like your storie and my favourite part was when you talked about going to Hamner Springs. I think you could improve by rereading your work to cheek for mistakes. I have never been to eather of those places and I can't wait to go. What was your favourite part of the trip. Keep up the great work.
ReplyDeleteMy favorite part was the hammer springs water park\hot pools thanks for the advise!
ReplyDeleteOk that sounds great hope you had fun
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